Reviewed Rescuing James Logan

Discussion in 'Completed Plots' started by Commodore, Sep 11, 2018.

  1. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    Character Name and Link: James Logan
    Character Level: 1
    Character Rank: Besadi
    Name of Plot: Rescuing James Logan
    Participants in the plot (Character accounts): @Herrith Hendarsin @Eira Baldr @Alask Vrein @Jetha @Darren Romulus Reed @James Logan
    Intended Outcome of Plot: Rescue James Logan off of Ryloth
    Actual Outcome of Plot: James Logan is rescued
    Any PVP or Staff DMing involved?[/USER]
    If yes, please highlight the relevant threads below
    Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:
     
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  2. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Story Admin RP Administrator

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    I have issues with this that would need to be addressed.

    • Is this a retroactive plot?
    • Please fix the tags in your opening post as you've added in words and names that weren't, as far as I can see, involved and then just added in random names. Fix it please
    • The first thread is wrong on so many levels. It features no players except yourself, as James and as the Storyteller - which would be fine were it in the chronicles section but then it wouldn't be able to be part of a plot. As it is it breaks a number of rules as you've had an entire thread with yourself, which we do not allow here
     
  3. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    So just delete the thread with me by my self and fix the name thing?
     
  4. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Story Admin RP Administrator

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    For this plot? Yes.

    To confirm, we have strict rules against solo threading. This will be your only warning - if you do it again you will be getting an infraction.
     
  5. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    I understand about the solo threading, but at the time, i did not know this. If you were to look at the thread date, it was created a rather long time ago. The thread also served the purpose as to how James got to Ryloth in the first place, becuase it would be weird if somehow James just showed up. But i understand the problem. I'll fix the issues, and tag you when i'm done, but anyways thanks for reminding me!

    -Commodore
     
  6. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    What do you mean by these two points?

    The tags in the opening post doesn't seem to have any names that shouldn't be there. I just see the list of participants. I could be wrong though. And what do you mean by retroactive plot? The plot did take a long time to finish if that is what you meant.


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  7. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Story Admin RP Administrator

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    It's always been part of the rules however.

    Your list includes @Jetha Zig Caedwyn @Darren Maximillan @Harquin Romulus Reed ...

    Who are these people? If they were accounts then they would have links when used with the @ symbol- fix it

    As for if it was a retroactive plot - did you submit the idea for the rescue to us before you did it for review by plot staff or did you do it and are now putting it as a plot?
     
  8. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    I believe the problem with the tag is that the characters are dead, and their accounts are removed. They are real accounts. I can get their OCC account people to support my claim. I have no idea what happened with the tags. The retroactive plot on the other hand, i submitted it for approval, and it was approved. @Deviant approved it.


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  9. Faster Than Light

    Faster Than Light Dapper af New Members Mod New Members Moderator

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    Sub account's don't get deleted, alive or dead. It looks like they are just errors when inputting them. Go back through the threads and make sure the right sub accounts are tagged. @Jetha @Darren Romulus Reed (?) .etc I recognize some of the names, but yeah

    And for the bold part, can you provide a link so that Nefie can look through it without having to comb through 100s of plots? I think he would appericate that.
     
  10. Commodore

    Commodore El Grande

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    The tags are fixed, thanks for the info, and here is the link for the plot approval. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/rescuing-james-logan.80337/


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  11. Nor'baal

    Nor'baal #NorbsForEmperor

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    Correctomondos.
     
  12. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Story Admin RP Administrator

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