Reviewed Hop on the magic school ship!

Discussion in 'Completed Plots' started by Sangga, Jun 27, 2019.

  1. Sangga

    Sangga Well, there's two schools of thought on that.

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    Character Name and Level:Luy, Level 2
    Character Rank:Jedi Master
    Name of Plot:Hop on the magic school ship!
    Participants in the plot (Character accounts): @Luy @Ner Giza @Karacaldra Von Kedisy @Joran Miran @Jake2 @Nikka Toren @Kae'Leigh Tameris @Horus Tempest
    Intended Outcome of Plot: Obtaining a starliner to turn into a mobile Jedi Academy, train first class.
    Actual Outcome of Plot: Class trained, starliner was not obtained.
    Any PVP or Staff DMing involved? No
    Link to Dice Roll Thread if used: N/A
    Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:
    Food and Funds(Died) obtaining the supplies for the ship.
    The Ship and the Crew(Died) obtinaing the ship and a crew.
    Running the Gauntlet (Died) with the ship obtained a hard turn requires the Grey Lady to drop out of hyperspace and make the turn for Ilum,
    Caves of Wonder (Complete) having arrived on Ilum and follow Luy to find their lightsaber crystals,
    I dub thee, but first... (Complete) with crystals found Luy teaches his students on how to construct their sabers.
     
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  2. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Formerly Staff; Currently Evil

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    Make the threads a list - right now it's a mess.
     
  3. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Formerly Staff; Currently Evil

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    Few things I would like to note about this submission;

    - This was never submitted as a plot, near as I can tell. Instead it was posted as a mission pack for a faction asset (a mobile Jedi Academy) and a group character plot. Now it is a potentially good thing this plot failed because even if it had succeeded it would have been rejected; as you would have been told at plot review, this plot has some large flaws that would make it's desired outcome not acceptable for the amount of work done.

    - As this is a failed plot, you will be granted credits but no completion bonus will be added.

    - Two threads (Food and Funds & Running the Gauntlet) will not be included. Gauntlet because it is far below the post count to be considered a thread worth rewarding and Food and Funds for double posting.

    Credits to where @Killa Ree ?
    I'm not sure if anyone else is dead - please alert me if they are. Otherwise?

    Credits allocated.
     
  4. Killa Ree

    Killa Ree She's a Killa Queen

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  5. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Formerly Staff; Currently Evil

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