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 Sith Order Executioner Ra'Kul

Discussion in 'Player-Controlled NPCs' started by EmilyHuene, Jun 17, 2019.

  1. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    EXECUTIONER RA'KUL

    N A M E
    Ii'nara Tameris

    F A C T I O N
    Sith Empire

    R A N K
    Crusader

    S P E C I E S
    Twi'lek

    A G E
    Forty six

    H O M E W O R L D
    Ryloth

    F O R C E _ S E N S T I V E
    Yes

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    Born on Ryloth, Ii'nara had the perfect life. She was raised in a loving family, had caring friends, and when she grew up she found the most wonderful husband. The two fell in love and had a child together whom they named @Kae'Leigh Tameris . Like her mother, Kae'Leigh showed signs of being Force sensitive. Ii'nara was grateful that the Sith Empire never found them, for she knew her life never would have been the same if she were thrown into service. But as the Sith factions began to split and war broke out, she knew it was only a matter of time.

    Knowing that the Empire would soon find them, the two fled into neutral space and landed on Nar Shaddaa with an old friend who agreed to take baby Kae'Leigh and look out for her until they could return. With a loving kiss, she said goodbye to her dearest child with the dream of returning home soon. That dream never came to fruition. Ii'nara was taken prisoner some few months later and sent to learn the ways of the Dark side. Her fear was her greatest weakness and she was broken in no time at all. Fearing her daughter's safety though, she did everything that was asked of her and did not resist her new masters.

    In time, Ii'nara became her own Sith Crusader with dreams of becoming a Darth. The Twi'lek took any mission she could to help instill power to her name and even began forging a name for herself as The Executioner. Meanwhile, she had not heard one word of her daughter's capture, and kept her eyes focused on all the new recruits coming and going from the Imperial Republica. Using her charm and her wits, she was able to make friends with the Old Empire as well to do the same; still, no signs of Kae'Leigh ever popped up. Her sacrifice was playing the part of the evil Sith assassin, and she would do so for as long as it took to safe her dearest daughter from ever becoming like her.

     
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  2. Wit

    Wit Beyond Measure

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    Was this approved by the sith FL? Darths are a very rare rank and such a NPC would be more likely a staff controlled NPC or an open to use one.
     
  3. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    Didn't know I needed permission. I just made her to do a story arc for my own sake.
     
  4. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Formerly Staff; Currently Evil Sith Empire FL

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    As AFL and a member of staff, I would have very much preferred to at least have had this put to the Sith leadership. As far as I am aware, neither @Faded Truth or myself approved this - and @Phoenix is away but he didn't mention anything else

    While it is true that Sith Lords are more common in the Empire than the number of player characters with the rank, it is still a very important rank and I think should need Faction Leadership approval.
     
  5. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    Again, didn't know I needed permission. Should I post it in chronicles or something?
     
  6. Nefieslab

    Nefieslab Formerly Staff; Currently Evil Sith Empire FL

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    If it's only being used in non-canon environments it doesn't really need a write up at all
     
  7. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    All I'm doing with her is a story for my twi'lek's background. And they run into each other in a thread I'm doing now. And will later be used as an informant to save her from the prison she's in now.
     
  8. Wit

    Wit Beyond Measure

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    Why not just replace it with a crusader? That rank would work just as well and is more of a commonplace rank.
     
  9. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    I mean if I have to I will, I'd rather have it be more influential though. I'm willing to edit it however I need to help it get approved as a Darth though. Where exactly is the problem? Where's the fear I should ask? What can I say that needs to be explained? Like an "Intent" kind of box or something. IDK.

    Edit: this is me asking for help, not arguing :)
     
  10. Wit

    Wit Beyond Measure

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    There are four darths on the site right now, and you want to make a personal NPC a Darth just for driving a personal story. That is the problem, it trivializes the title if people start making random NPCs at such high ranks. Also, I do believe that there is some rule about NPCs which limit a personal NPC to only be up to a rank the character themselves has. Anf even then special ranks like Darth and Jedi Councilor are so important that they are normally restricted for staff controlled NPCs.
     
  11. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    Well I would be a Darth if I was more open to doing PVP battles. But I've been declined that rank until I do. I know what you're saying though. I guess I never saw that rule myself. Nor am I sure where to go looking for it.

    And I understand about just anyone coming in and making them. I'm more than happy to have a staff member play her, just I wanted her to act a very specific way so that's why I've been playing her int he thread I'm doing now.
     
  12. Wit

    Wit Beyond Measure

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    Sorry but that's not gonna fly. Staff has more than enough on their plates, and this isn't really a negotiation. A crusader is as high a rank as this NPC can occupy, if that doesn't work then I can archive this for you.
     
  13. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    Edited^
     
  14. Wit

    Wit Beyond Measure

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    There are still mentions of sith Lord in the actual bio, and the title is still Darth.
     
  15. EmilyHuene

    EmilyHuene The Lightbringer

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    Forgot about the title lol @.@ And now I think I got them all.