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 Sith Order Amur

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    Amur

    Sith Empire Sith Acolyte Level 1 Force Sensitivity: Yes, trained
    Homeworld Coruscant Human Female Age 27
    Height & Weight 1.7m, 70kg Theme



    Character Information

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      Amur is primarily seen dressed in her sith outfit of black robes that completely cover her body and face. Underneath her outfit is a set of tight fitting gray compression clothes. Underneath that is her body that is covered in 60% burns. Scar tissue and flesh is spread spoaridcally across it with a heavy concentration of scarring around her back, neck and upper thighs. Her face which was once attractive is now horribly mangled with inflamed burn marks running up the left half of it. At the left corner of her lips there is now a tiny 0.5 cm hole there with with a thin strip of skin bisecting the hole. Amur's once long flowing blonde hair is now just a bunch manic patches on her scalp. As a result Amur prefers to stay fully clothed with her face obscured at all times. Never wanting to people to see what really lies beneath.
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      Amur was once known as Skyler Targrin, belonging to an affluent family of politicians on Coruscant. Cogs for the empire that she despised as it seemed like her family were enslaved to the cult of the status quo. Still it afforded her many luxuries mainly in the form of education and being able to witness unseen aspects of politicking. She took these lessons to heart and by the time Skyler was 21 she became another cog of the Imperial Republica government but with aspirations beyond most of her family. Silently wishing for the return of the republic and wanting to make changes from within the system. She set her sights on eliminating the corruptive influence of the mafia and in doing so started to form a romantic relationship with a fellow politician who seemed to have the same aspirations.

      Still her efforts seemed to get her nowhere with each piece of evidence either disappearing, going nowhere, or negated. Frustrations with the system working against led to her growing more close with her confidant lover believing he was the only ally she had. One night Skyler was at her family's winter mansion to meet with her love confident she had finally came across the lynchpin that could send the mafia's influence tumbling down in a major way. Her love did rendezvous with her but also in the company of mobsters. Skyler discovered her love had been working with mafia the entire time and was secretly sabotaging all of her efforts. His final act of betrayal was having Skyler tied to a chair, covering her and the mansion with flammable liquid and setting everything ablaze. Skyler survived by desperately flinging herself out of a window, crashing into the ground and rolling into the nearby icy river.

      An eternity seemed to pass as morning came and Skyler was clinging on to any vestiges of life that were still left when a Sith discovered her. Normally the sith would have just put the weakling out of it's misery but he felt a strong outcry of force energy emanating from screaming burned and frostbitten person. An inner strength that just refused to die. So he rescued her. After recovering enough to be able to walk and move around she was offered the chance to train and hone her abilities so that she may become one to now prey on the weak. She went to Korriban and train in the ways of the Sith and the embrace of the dark side. She latched onto the ideas of the old empire and the rule of the strong realizing her idealistic aspirations for change had made her weak and ripe for being manipulated. Skyler decided that the fires had infact been her rebirth and tossed away her old birth name. Skyler Targrin was a fool that died at the hands of her weak ideals. She was now Amur. Set upon climbing to peak of the mountain of the mighty.
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      Amur is a natural manipulator due to her politicking past. Often trying arrange every single relationship so that the person in question is reliant on her. Dangling carrots to get people to do what she wants while lightly implying that there would be sticks in case someone failed her. She has no qualms about anyone's tragedy other than the chances that she could use that as buttons to press to get someone to do what she wants. Amur always tries to keep her scheming and ploys set to achieving an end game of some kind only caring about herself.

      Amur however finds herself now incapable of relating to anyone but herself and is thus disconnected from the feelings of others. Often times when she seems to be bonding with someone she's merely trying to network a pawn that she could add to her toolset. It would take a force bond for Amur to feel empathy again. Amur also has an innate paranoia now assuming that all people she meets only care for themselves. She's always expecting a stab in the back at any point and is quick to notice on any sign that the person she is with could be having second thoughts or desiring to leave her for dead. Feeding her manipulative mindset.

      Finally she feels a sense of shame for her past life as Skyler. A self hatred that made it so she can't bear to look at herself in the mirror naked. Part of her transformation was in hopes to destroy everything about herself that was still Skyler. Though despite being offered to have cybernetics and surgery done to repair the damage to her body she refuses deciding to bear with the constant chronic pain and the scars to serve as a reminder of her sins and to say to herself that she may never go back to living in the comfortable ignorance ever again.
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      Amur dedicated herself to training in the ways of the force and war. She prefers to get up close with her lightsaber but is also practiced in shooting with a slug throwing sidearm as a backup. Her force training is so far focused on enhancing her physical capabilities and range of movement to compensate for the damage her body has sustained. Still she finds that her pain limits her stamina having to take care to conserve energy in fights. However Amur also is trying learn how to channel her sensations of pain into emotion and passion so that her force attacks can have more power behind them and that her pain in the future with more training may actually fuel her energy, though Amur is still far from reaching that point.

      Outside of combat Amur has found to be skilled in the piloting of land speeders and fighters. Has an acute sense for playing the Realpolitick game and manipulating people. Amur also is talented with acting so that she may hid the psychopathic reality of her personality.

      As for Equipment Amur has the following:

      • A Comlink for communication
      • CZ MSBR (Acquired through completion of NPC job here)
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    So the republic hasn't been a thing for over 500 years, and all characters who draw ancestry from that period are legacy characters. I'd like it if you removed the mentions of her family having been part of the republic, that sort of lineage needs to be earned through the legacy character rules. Also, if she's 27 then she can't have been a senator at 21 as there were no senators at that time. There was no senate, it was set up basically months ago IC. Also, the GA was also not publicly known till a year or so ago, so she couldn't have been a closet GA supporter.
     
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    Ok thank you for responding. I didn't realize the absorption of the Republic was that long ago.

    Would removing mentions of the republic, changing the ga supporter comment to wishing for the return of republic, and replacing mentions of senator with being part of the imperial republica government suffice?

    I made these changes to the bio for you to look at. let me know if there are any issues or anything else you would like changed.
     
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    Note: changed some pics around, updated her inventory a bit nothing too substantial